Secret
Me:
The moon lies beautiful
half veiled behind the clouds
it dares not shine as a whole
muted in its lair
You:
The quiet forbidden love,
nestled in the shadow of tomorrow
Waits patient to be born Brittle,
but not yet broken
Both struggle for their moment in the light
© Katy Hughes 2012
this is a very interesting poem , .....my interpretation was a secret love affair hidden in shadow of night.......interesting juxtaposition of light and dark suggests to me 1). the anticipation of posessing the beauty in full light ( love ).........and 2 ). the idea of light overpowering and revealing the shadowed secret........but would love to learn more about this poem........it has interesting form love the line.....
nestled in the shadow of tomorrow
which could have multiple meanings
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Glyn Pope
Mon 14th May 2012 20:42
yes, this is good.