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In depths of darkness out of doors

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In depths of darkness out of doors
in thunderstorms, in pouring rain,
the kisses on my mind are yours.
In depths of darkness, out of doors,
I'll bide my time until it pours
and lose myself in you again
in depths of darkness out of doors
in thunderstorms, in pouring rain.

◄ This is the poem

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John Coopey

Tue 24th Apr 2012 23:54

I never spotted it was a triolet.
And a neat one too.

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Tue 24th Apr 2012 15:44

Beautiful.

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Yvonne Brunton

Mon 23rd Apr 2012 20:48

Hurrah for the triolet! Well done TT. XX

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