Music
sometimes
you have to let
yourself fall
with the graceful
arc
of the dive r
or
the
plop
of
a fat fish
going with the flow
to love
the
music
April 2012
Comments
<Deleted User> (6315)
Tue 24th Apr 2012 13:13
I think this is bloody great Glyn...you know something though..I do not think you really need the 'or' as the disconnected 'r' does the same for me..whatchathink? :)
ee love him. I was reminded afterwards. I didn't think, I'll write in the style of.
Thank you the three of you for your comments.
Lovely work.
The contrast of images from the graceful arc to the heavy 'plop' is very effective. A great analagy: different styles of both diving and music.
This is simply phrased but very skillfully honed. XX
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<Deleted User> (6315)
Tue 24th Apr 2012 13:13
nah keep the or lol. :)