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Two Poems on Dreaming

Wide Asleep.

 

In the spell of order’s brief demise

the anarchy of slumber plies

a stimulating trade,

lading senses’ dense receipts

through synapses to deeper seats.

But in this shifting some persist

in scenes that sense cannot resist;

they entertain the rapid eye,

compel the quiet tongue to speak,

and puppeteer the twitching limbs

that let their motive power leak;

until the clock’s alarmed lament

insinuates a dull report

that interrupts the antic flow

to cut the shallow madness short.

 

 

Brainwater.

 

Like rainwater percolates

through permeable rock it seems

details drawn from wakefulness

add flavour to the stock of dreams;

they slip from cell to gifted cell

and settle into hidden seams,

to reappear in slumber where

                        the fleck of recognition gleams.

 

 

 

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Comments

Travis Brow

Sat 24th Mar 2012 09:48

I'm relatively new to posting things online but i'm delighted and gratified by all your responses. Thank you.

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Fri 23rd Mar 2012 22:23

Top of the'wowser'list for sure.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 23rd Mar 2012 21:28

Imaginative and stimulating - like the impulses
that travel through our conscious and sub-conscious minds. I like the composition and the word-craft of the first poem especially...
the alarm clock ending is spot-on.

Travis Brow

Fri 23rd Mar 2012 15:35

Thanks Nick, I appreciate your kind comments. I can't seem to get the last line of Brainwater to line up; the offset appearance is unintentional.

<Deleted User> (10123)

Fri 23rd Mar 2012 14:27

Wide Asleep - an agitated brain working overtime when it should be resting. Nicely put down in words.

Brainwater - geologic joining with the Wide Asleep. A very interesting concept. One worthy of further consideration. with mny thanks for sharing, Tara Nick.

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