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The Photograph

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On the little table by her bed

Dusty lampshade, fringes shabby-draped,

Casting forever-shadows,

On the faded photograph.

Long fingers of dark space waiting at the edge

Like memories now faded and

Forgotten in her tired mind.

Little-girl eyes stare vacantly,

Trustingly, at beyond our knowledge.

 

Picture has slipped in its frame

Mind has slipped in its brain

Life has forgotten the game

And slipped away through the

Tendrils of the shabby, dusty lampshade’s fringe,

Back into the dark spaces

Between the smiling faces

In the photograph.

 

Take me back,

take me back to

When I can remember.

Take me back

take me back

To when I was alive

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Yvonne Brunton

Mon 20th Feb 2012 21:01

The repetition/similar words are deliberate (but with word order changed) to emphasise the idea of loneliness and not looked after/not able to look after oneself.

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Yvonne Brunton

Mon 20th Feb 2012 20:52

Thankyou, Graham,

Although my mother was not bedridden, her gradual slide into Alzheimers triggered the emotion

<Deleted User> (9824)

Mon 20th Feb 2012 20:20

A very sad but poignant Poem... Yvonne is it about a relative of yours...maybe somebody who is bed-ridden?

Lovely words-' Life has forgotten the game'
and 'Between the smiling faces in the photograph'...

Have used same/similar words in both verse - ie
shabby, dusty lampshade fringes...twice suggest maybe-

'And slipped away through those now darkened shaded memories....just dark spaces - between those happy smiling faces in the photograph.'

But this is only a suggestion, again lovely poem!

Regards - Graham

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