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Falling Colors

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Pretty girl paints colors raw
 
with whole body
 
covered in wet white chalk
 
stinging the canvas with her strokes
 
as she bends in this hot light
 
 
 
On knees
 
you swish color up
 
lighting the room
 
song orange
 
in soft swift movements
 
canary yellow floats freely and  deep red
 
is condemed
 
silently I sway with you
 
a marrionette
 
 i am hyponitized
 
wrapped up generously in your sullen gestures
 
and bottom lip pout
 
i breathe you in without a care of being yours
 
i watch unnoticed
 
and smile long,
 
 for the girl who paints the falling colors

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Barbi Touron

Mon 20th Feb 2012 17:18

Thanks, Yeah the pics are mine, I love takings photos of strange things i find in the woods/city, then tweak them a bit in Photo Scape. more pics coming your way.Cheers

Lizzie

Mon 20th Feb 2012 10:37

"...as she bends in this hot light"
I agree with Laura, all the pictures are very striking.

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Laura Taylor

Mon 20th Feb 2012 10:22

'song orange' - :)

These pictures you are putting up - are they yours? I like them very much.

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