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The playground of lights

Down in the dark wood stood the old man of the forest;
the ancient yew tree, whose boughs were as thick
as the silt that sits in pits in rocks in streams.
His bark was bottle coloured trousers
of the felted short-stemmed moss,
where lichens grow on carbonate salt
that seeps from limestone bust and broken,
where the old man’s roots grow into its fault lines.
Dashing and darting lights like fireflies
flitter giggling from branch to branch.

Seeing there was no one there but me,
the old man spoke:
“You see them? The lights? They are not flies.
They flitter and fluster. I leave them be.
These are the flowers of the forest.
These are the lives that never were.
They flutter burning through the wood.
These are the dead – the children at play.”
gurning through the flappings of tiny things
that flap past his ancient face, he continued:
“There are the lights of those cut short
those that lived the saddest and shortest lives.
In death, they play in a better world,
safe in the deep dark wood.”

Listening as best I could in the silence of the small dark grotesque grotto
that played hostess to their innocent play,
I heard them say:
And we can watch the nymphs as they swim and play
in the trickling brooks
as the sunlight glimmers on a warm summers day
as the ferns sway gently by the calm cool stream.
And we can set fire to stuff, and everything
and SMASH EVERYTHING
SMASH EVERYTHING, people.
And... breathe...
okay,
Smash it up some more.
And, breathe.
And...
... relax.
Now,
how did that make you feel?

◄ Paradise ignored

Goodbye to the monsoons of summer ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 21st Feb 2012 12:36

I must get back to this, Dermot. See you tomorrow.

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 13th Feb 2012 12:42

Very Dermot Glennon, Mr Vivid. Absolutely bathetic.

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Sat 11th Feb 2012 20:50

Very vivid Mr Glennon xx

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Francine

Thu 9th Feb 2012 07:18

Yeah, had me feeling all entranced... until the end!
So like you to twist things! But I like it : )

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Thu 9th Feb 2012 00:19

paganistically perfect!

<Deleted User> (10013)

Thu 9th Feb 2012 00:13

Imagery seems to be a buzzword for the poems I use tonight; I agree with Mike - took me straight to the forest, and then made me want to get the Hell out of it.

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 9th Feb 2012 00:10


Strange combination of weird wood,botanised gurner, and (murdered) innocent Rape of the lock like flittering fireflies, plus a female grotto, ending in a let`s smash it all, nature,myth, and people - the lot!

The `explanation` doesn`t begin to explain where it`s come from...I get the same feeling as Laura`s `plucked too soon` A most peculiar `fairy story` though.

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DG

Wed 8th Feb 2012 23:06

Interesting comments - thanks. Yes, that bit's about all these stories that come out in the news about child deaths because of the mum's new boyfriend is a psycho thing and what that must do to their young minds when all this is happening. Really didn't want to go down the depressing route though and it was partly due to a discussion just before in which I was telling the person running the workshop that I often use internal rhymes to make certain things hit on a beat for the impact and emotional engagement and I often write poems as cameos of emotional progressions that I've undergone. Hence the postmodern bit at the end.

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Mike Hilton

Wed 8th Feb 2012 14:11

I felt as though I was there in the forest. Really captured my imagination.

Brill, excellent!

Mike

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Laura Taylor

Wed 8th Feb 2012 10:05

Wooo - this is a fascinating one. I'm a sucker for old-style fairy tales, and this ticks lots of boxes for me, as well as being beautifully alliterative. Some wonderful use of language in this - I'd like this to be read out to me.

But then...but THEN...the ending. Spooky as! Totally turns it around from the innocent little children to the ARGHH that must be the result of having been plucked too soon.

This chimes with a short story I wrote about a perpetual fire in any forest in any part of the world...it exists to keep lost and lonely children alive.

Great poem, really enjoyed reading this.

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