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THE NIGHT BATTLE

 

 

The time

Was opportune.

My members all had mutinied,

Gone traitorous,

Withdrawn

Their mandate from the will,

And the will stood,

A lonely sentinel,

Afraid.

 

Behind my eyes

The minds limbs had grown gaunt,

Gnarled,

Defoliate.

And through all

The Simmoom of a desiccating want

Ceaselessly parched.

 

She

Was a cry to combat.

Eyes

Shafting javelins,

Shoulder sabre-slashing,

In her voice

A provocation of hostile guns

 

I,

Being flint and tinder,

Flashed into fire,

Rallied

To a rouse of bugles through the blood,

Attained

A sudden unity of intent

And attacked.

 

The conflict

Was un-concluded.

For although

I claimed the spoils of victory,

Her eyes reminded me

That I remained

An un-admitted alien.

 

And so we lay

In the final hour of the dark

Each one from the other

Isolate,

While ourselves

Warily in the no man`s land between

Made parley.

 

Until,

Tired of pretence,

She slipped with one sad utterance the mask.

And her eyes broke

And spilled their pity on her breasts.

 

Losing

All inclination for the fray,

I stood my forces down,

Disbanded them,

And coming close,

Surrendered.

 

(Through Her sleep

She smiled a weary smile of victory)

 

And then the grave young Day

Crept in

And stood beside us,

And the courteous Dawn-wind

Hushed his breath a little,

And the birds -

For fear of awakening us -

Slept on,

And the sun rose…on a morning full of peace.

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 22nd Feb 2012 23:55

Love the imagery. A great approach to the 'battle of the sexes'
Yvonne x x

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 21st Jan 2012 15:01

An imaginative (plus!) take on the subject.
I particularly like the concluding lines. The
imagery is striking elsewhere too. Another fine contribution.

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Harry O'Neill

Sat 21st Jan 2012 12:13



Anthony...Thanks.

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Anthony Emmerson

Sat 21st Jan 2012 11:47

Hi Harry,

A very interesting take on the subject. A very creative use of language. "Simmoom" has a lovely sonority. You might want to look at "Defololiate" though - slow picked leaves maybe? :)

Regards,
A.E.

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Harry O'Neill

Sat 21st Jan 2012 11:46

Anne...Re the subtitle:I used to perform it with the joke that it was written before `Viagra and the Pill had spoiledthe whole bloody shennanigan by casualising it`But wasn`t going to blog that bit. But I`d just read a report that large sections of Japan`s youth were actually becoming dis-interested in sex and began to get the horrible fear that any youngster under the age of forty might not even `get` what the poem was about.But generally you`re right - so it`s off.

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Mike Hilton

Fri 20th Jan 2012 10:30

Hi Harry. I like the sub title (sorry Ann)-I can see the other side eventhough as Ann said it's a serious poem.
Good stuff

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 20th Jan 2012 08:14

I like this Harry. But I think the subtitle spoils it, as if you are trying to make it comic, when I think it is a serious poem. Just my thought!

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Dave Bradley

Thu 19th Jan 2012 23:45

What a striking poem - don't think I've read anything like it. I love "the mind's limbs had grown gaunt"

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