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Constant

 

As I wash, spray and cut

My mind is a flutter: A road map; turning left, then right

In spite of my efforts to slow the engine down.

 

As I chomp, crunch and swallow

More thoughts follow: Look at me, no me

Got to do this; got to do that

I take a deep breath; in hope of a space: Checking

My heart for rhythm and pace.

 

I hear something buzzing and fear sets in: Did I check my

Hob? Has my washing finished it’s spin?

 

Seeking the child within; when play time was fun;

No need for lists: Just begin and begin

 

Living each day, etching and etching

This mind of mind is slowly recollecting and finding

It’s way.

 

Bellinda Johnston - All poems are copyright of the original author

By Belinda Johnston

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Jeff Dawson

Tue 16th Sep 2008 17:25

Hi Belinda, hope you're okay over there!

I like this, it sounds like your mind is still stuck in the rat race of japan, well thats how it came over to me, great stuff!

Just one thing, I thought the line 'Got to do this and that' would sound better with the meaning and rhythm of the poem if it was 'Got to do this, got to do that' - see what you think, to alter login, click edit on your poem, amend it and then update entry.

Hope that helps, I've added a deep one today! hope you like it, let me know, take care Jeff X

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