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Hope

 

On the night of high cloud,
buzzards ride warm thermals,
Narapho ignites a scepter of stars
and God shields his eyes.

Old women hold hands, pray for the rains.
Men kiss at the river mouth, unborn shift.
Movement wakes a heaviness tired of waiting.

Smoothing ripples of taut belly skin
legs bound, she cries in layers.
Each wave blurs,
carries her beyond willingness,
beyond the stubbornness of woman.

Up, up towards the buzzards
and the magic of this special night.
Always hopeful for the harvest,
ever hopeful for the children
Narapho opens his arms.
 

 

 

 

 

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Martin Peacock

Thu 12th Jan 2012 13:06

Oh, I love this, Stella. Very sensuous/sensual [? - I always get these 2 mixed up] Gnomic and tingly in equal measure - phew!

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Laura Taylor

Fri 4th Nov 2011 11:59

Ahhh interesting re the original title! And you are a mare, aren't you? Teasing us with a bloody made-up god! :D Ace!

Philipos

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 20:15

Just think Stella, you invented Narapho. Don't let the film producers own your copyright for less than a million.

Nice poem. Banter priceless .......

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Wed 2nd Nov 2011 17:24


Ok fess up!! Narapho will not be found on google cept for the one in my mind..ha!

Dave pleased it summoned up a mood, that is what I was aiming for

Rach cheers m'dear for liking xx

Laura..first title was Sacrifice but decided to change it :)

Ha John..I shall make Narapho into my lover and luckily I won't be the woman sacrificed! Well sometimes we can be just a tad stubborn can't we?..

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John Coopey

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 16:19

OOz this Narafo then? Google just refers me to some stella fella.
...and another thing....
women??? stubborn??? where do you get that from?

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Laura Taylor

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 11:38

Ha - I have just googled too and nowt! It does send out tons of images though - feels like sacrificial ancient custom sorta thing.

I love this line: Men kiss at the river mouth, unborn shift.

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Rachel Bond

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 10:42

this is very good. x

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Dave Bradley

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 10:31

All sort of allusions and hints, but Google no help with Narapho. I like this Stella. It summons up a mood.

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