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FOR ROSE

 

(with regrets)

 

Rose, it doesn`t need me to say

How warm your eyes are,

How full of the merry-dance flicker and play

Of flame. The light of a bright star`s

Cold compared ( that light`s more near,

Snug from your heart-blaze, cosy and charm and cheer).

 

These are but truths.

 

And you`ve got grace girl, your dancing soothes

Tired eyes, as in the music`s slake you move,

Straight as a sea-frond, supple, and slender, and smooth.

 

Friendly as help your smile was, welcome-wide,

So open love it humbled all my pride.

But I – the cold outsider - stayed outside

……………………………………………..

Yes I…the cold outsider…stayed…outside

 

 

 

◄ THE AVRA

TWO JINGLES ►

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Nick Coleman

Mon 31st Oct 2011 17:23

Harry, yes this is very moving,an apple that wanted picking but the hand reaching out to it froze.
And Thanks for comments on Womb. Ditto I am an old fart who really does not want to labour too hard to 'get' a poem (and I dont do sudoku either.)

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 29th Oct 2011 18:51

we loved the whole poem Harry
especially the way you hauntingly ended it.

thank you.

Patricia and Stef.

Philipos

Sat 29th Oct 2011 16:50

How moving Harry. An enjoyable read with some really good images.

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