Haikku for October
October
Sycamore leaves fall,
Evening paths become golden
Veins of memory
Comments
Excellent. Does just enough to fire the reader's imagination.
i love this, 'viens of memory' is a great image
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Elaine Booth
Tue 1st Nov 2011 21:59
To my understanding this is an excellent example of haiku with a strong last line, doing exactly what it should.