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Poppy Picking Day

Poppy Picking Day

Posted on Tuesday 16th November 2010

 

I say this to poppy-wearers; which is it?

The papery one that sprang from Flanders mud,

To jog the memory of long rotten dead?

Or the one from Afghan fields,

The flower of   pipe-line power,

That feeds the morphine dream,

Lets you forget when you fill

Your tank with Arab blood

And surf along on its energy sud?

In winsome rhetoric you say

“It’s war ,I don’t like it”

But your car,

Admit it,

You love it!

 

So flag-drape the invisible coffins

Of blown-to-peace babies,

Gather up the home-come amputees,

The broken lads so well-dressed,

In the town of wooden waistcoats,

Place the lily-wreathes that don’t out -stink

The trail of motor car faeces.

In mucous rhetoric you may say:

“It’s war ,I don’t like this!”

But for your car,

Admit it,

You love it!

 

For you choose to lose

All connection in a rush-hour swoon,

To wrap up in that cherished metal cocoon,

With bottled-up tears  sprinkle  the carpet,

Of your four-wheel last -chance saloon.

In saccharine rhetoric, grieving you say,

“It’s war, I don’t like it.!”

It’s war for your car,

Admit it,

You love it!

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Elaine Booth

Fri 18th Nov 2011 00:07

Well said here, Steve.

Good to meet you last Tuesday and once again, loved your poems. Your performance was excellent - you brought your work to life vividly.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 10th Nov 2010 18:49

I wonder if you have posted this before. The theme is surely a popular one, even the 'love your car' idea, so perhaps not. You do make a good social point. How can the posting date be Nov 16, 2010?

Steve Smith

Tue 9th Nov 2010 17:37

My play 'Trip to the Cottage,':theme of emigration. Casa hope St. Liverpool 17th November. Starts 8p.m.

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