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DING MY DONG !!!!

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Oh the things you do to me

Wel.. the things I wish you did

Oh the things you could do to me

Ravenous like a beast

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SEXUALLLL

-1word-

oh so many implications

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BUT YOU

CAN DING

MY

DONG

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ring that bell

its bigger than KING KONG

SLAP THAT BATTT

Like we were playing PING PONG

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OH FOR GODS SAKE

You do make me hands shake

Maybe its when I see your long snake

OH nearly caused an earthquake

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GIZZZ A DOOO!!!

Oh yeh.. mmm yeh YOU!!

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YOU. IZ. GORJUSS

Look at that oh yeh HOT STUFF

You are sizzling jus like me oven muffs

What can I say perhaps its coz ur RUGG and RUFF

WATEVAAAAAA

Jus come over here && put me in cuffs

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WHATTT DID SHE SAYYY

Margret in the butchers, chit chat on a rainy day

OH NO.. NEVER THAT

The tails of husband who just got caught out

THAT DIRTY F*****G RATTT!!

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BUT YOU

YES YOU

Sensual as they come

Got my heart beatin like a drum

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YOU

CAN

DING

MY

DONG

◄ UNCHAIN ME

I READ YOUR POEM ►

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 8th Sep 2008 20:26

Rang my bell! Theres another song! Good fun, nice one Gabriela, think I'll use the cold bath after Ieuan! Jeff X

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clarissa mckone

Sun 7th Sep 2008 20:06

HI Gabriella,
This poem does seem to grab! It reminded me of 2 songs, one tittled ring my bell, and the ding dong song by gunther.When your in your fourties you may have a burnin desire, with pantys on fire. Haha good one, enjoyed the laugh thanks

Ieuan Cilgwri

Sun 7th Sep 2008 14:40

I need to go and take a cold bath.

Now that is original and something [watching my words carefully here] I'd pay money to hear and see!

A great beat to it, thanks for sharing.

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