It's The Way
I hear you
touch the day
with expectations
and review
I feel your joy
in solitude
precious times
silenty taste
sharp air
On the outside
I window shop
for trinkets
set a fire
Then I run
in my mind
like the wind
to the sky
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Comments
read this first thing today A lovely way to start a sunny day :-) Win
<Deleted User> (9520)
Sat 22nd Oct 2011 10:17
So perceptive, so just the way I'm feeling...
No1 fan
Only just read this Stella. It's lovely. I particularly like how it finishes.
Philipos
Mon 17th Oct 2011 17:04
Delightful - no other word for it.
I enjoyed this, Stella - I think you can read it different ways and interpret other connotations, but I like that :)
<Deleted User> (6315)
Mon 17th Oct 2011 11:53
mmm..took the dog out late on, very dark, no torch, still I could hear and feel her..then home and amazon..lol then dreams..
where is your mind going here Stella?...I think you are waving- though you do get your feet wet.
Tommy
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<Deleted User> (9801)
Sun 23rd Oct 2011 20:51
The ending makes me think of rushing clouds? I love the beautiful picture, thankyou