NUMB
I’ve got amnesia and I don’t know where I am. It came down upon me
and I’ve become so confused – can’t you help me to find my mind?
Am I alone in my own helpless world with watery images blurring my
consciousness forever?
I feel a soggy mess, my limbs weighing me down, unable to do anything.
I just sit here numb to the world wondering when Ill be part of it and if
my mind will ever return?
its absolutely terrifying and explaining it renders most to give you a wide berth, in reality. I had an image of tiny creature, slumped, with arms outstretched.
Philipos
Mon 19th Sep 2011 20:56
Worst nightmare realised - the mind suddenly goes. Seen the idea used often enough in story plots but the reality - yuk. What an original idea yours for a poem.
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nick armbrister
Tue 20th Sep 2011 13:21
thanx for posting and reading. i know it would be awful and so bad, i wrote this some time ago. If it happens to me, my mind going, please shoot me lol. In reality, people losing their mind is a very serious topic and not a nice one.