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Nightbird

The nightbird calls, crestfallen

Covering a nest in shadow.

Slight strings of glint

Peek from a window reflection.

 

Everything that exists

Is somewhere out there.

The flowers and killers.

Planets, rabbits,

Stationary, everything dead,

Alive or indifferent

Resides in the space

Beyond my window.

 

Censored families asleep in their jewellery.

Homeless men petting scruffy terriers

And no connection whatsoever

 

To the nightbird

Fixing the final pieces

Of darkness to his nest.

Clips it down,

Turns back to me

One last time

To wonder

Why I stare.

◄ Nothing Happens For A Reason

Odium ►

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melanie coady

Tue 6th Sep 2011 23:05

aw wow hun love it...flowers and killers..brill xx

<Deleted User> (8730)

Sun 21st Aug 2011 17:03

very good as well....

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 20th Aug 2011 12:41

This is clever language; but, I don't think that the overall thoughts hang together. IMO, this is a great idea that needs more cultivating, and culling. I find that great dexterity in word choices can sometimes actually become a weakness.

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