Kiss she dabble touch lady
Lately lady gentle cool linger smile
Warm in her deep dream eyes
Brown as comfort
Drinking in my every all
Deep into her sigh upon perfumed sigh
Comes then sleep pillow kissed prayer
Comes then every longest forever never night
Wide asleep wretched until the bright of morn
Good afternoon Cynthia
Thank you so much for your insight and for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
long time no see Cynthia I hope you are well.
Many Thanks
Gus xx
Gorgeous! Love the experimental style, full of rich diction, musical lines and penetrating images.
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Andy N
Sat 28th Jan 2012 13:14
great stuff, gus.. hope you are well.. speak soon.. andy n