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Beijing calling

Beijing Olympics, the world is watching

And nothing could be finer than being

In China in the morning smog, choking

Not too much joking going on, hoping

We’ll get the odd gold or two in Beijing

The smoking gun, the foggy smoggy ring

Of starting pistol, net monitoring

And not just in the hammer and sickling

But free speech and human rights restricting

That said, maybe it’s a bit nitpicking

To pick on Peking, peeking and seeking

To preach, when democracy’s weakening

In the west, which stayed best by bullying

The rest; now the great test is approaching

◄ Stars stuck

Bad weather warning ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (5646)

Tue 5th Aug 2008 23:15

Hey, great minds think alike.
Only i'll take my water in the mornin'.
probly with a couple of aspirin.
Cheers.

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Jeff Dawson

Tue 5th Aug 2008 22:43

Hi Antonio, this is excellent, some great lines here and some well raised issues brought to the fore and summarised well in your lines which are very well linked.

I couldn't believe the news (well I could) where the woman had her house knocked down to make way for some facilities and wasn't even compensated, thats the Olympic spirit!!!

Thanks for your comments on my seasons poem especially getting over the cliche of the subject. I know what you mean about starting in January but in my usual depressing way I did want to start with life and end with death while the seasons start again. cheers Jeff

<Deleted User> (5646)

Tue 5th Aug 2008 22:40

Not only is this very up to date, which admittedly is not unusual for you. But its pretty fast too.
I think this is one of the best you done in a while.
Lots o love and i'll open another bottle beer to celebrate with you.
J. xxx

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