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Wed 22nd Jun 2011 21:14
Like it lots !
(did I hear mention of ye TomTom club Annie ?)
Thanks Ann yes I see what you mean.
This reminds me of a song from ages ago called "Words" (by Tomtom Club I think.) I like the way it moves from hustle and bustle to a rather lonely ending, though the conclusion is hopeful. I might put "Chance of a visitor, now slim" as the third from last verse, I think it scans easier. Nice poem :)
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Hazel
Wed 22nd Jun 2011 23:41
Thank you Banksy.