Blue-Eyes
Blue-Eyes cried.
Bathed in flat moonlight,
soiled by incestuous hands,
she cried.
Comments
Very stark and sad.
Don't worry about not being able to take part in the shoes/feet thing - if the inspiration isn't there you can't write - I'm the same.
I have managed to write miserable poetry on shoes though....
Isobel x
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Adam Woolley
Wed 15th Jun 2011 10:58
Wow. Seventeen syllables and a huge impact. It usually takes me five stanzas minimum to get my point across. And even then my point is about something really menial like Margarine or Jedward. This is really impressive.
Adam :)