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Populous

It is an average day.

I am on a street walking

Shin stalked sudden steps.

There are men

Three quaters human

Also crawling.

 

Some faceless women

Laughing at shade

Parading hip steady

In a fake tan marathon

To make ugly girls

Feel ten again.

 

I blink at the sky.

My hand,

A makeshift sun umbrella.

Crouch my brow.

Sit and think.

 

What a day to disappear.

◄ Modern Imperfections Two

You Think Your The Only Lonely Person On This Fuckedforsaken Planet ►

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Ray Miller

Tue 17th May 2011 14:48

I like the 2nd verse, surprising and original, but I think you could do without the first verse and wouldn't parasol be better than sun umbrella?
parasol/ crouch my brow

'course it would, they're like hand in glove.

<Deleted User> (7212)

Tue 17th May 2011 09:01

love it Kealan - you've been on the waccy baccy again, aintcha ?? :)

[when you're stuff is good, it's world-class IMHO]

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