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Stronghold lost

Windows that never wore glass
let the cold in more than ever.
Outside, the dried-up moat
offers no protection,
vulnerable, we suffer.
Cracked between the bricks
and crumbling fast,
these castle walls are falling.
Exposed, we shrivel,
shrink back against the cold, hard floor,
self-afflicted and pitiful,
resigned to ruin and shame.
Surrounded by walls that stand no more.


 

escape

Sunset ►

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Elaine Booth

Sat 4th Jun 2011 14:25

Love a succinct, evocative poem, Kath - thanks for sharing this one. X

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Alan Morrison

Wed 18th May 2011 16:51

There is nothing more fetching than the vulnerability of the poet exposed. There is something about an open wound that I love. Far more interesting than mere scar tissue...

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Andy N

Sat 14th May 2011 23:30

Much admit Kath.. Would be tempted to use the first line as a title here, but this is a top, top piece - again you've jumped a gear with your writing here.... guessing this is going to be entered for the escape competition.. If not, it should be! x

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Francine

Sat 14th May 2011 20:48

I love this... for obvious reasons : )

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kath hewitt

Sat 14th May 2011 15:07

Apologies for the shit title!

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