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Witches

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Why were there witches?

Why, what were they to do,

widows and virgins, women deprived

of the love of men by the death of men?

Those warriors with their wars,

always a'killing of each other,

leaving the grieving, the surviving

and the loneliness to women.

No bigamy or polygamy.

The hunger for family

cries on village edge.

 

How were these starvelings to live?

When bodies no longer sell,

clients condemn,

thrusting away the woman

with their own dark side.

Could they not have paid

for the loan of her body

with life?

What of mercy?

 

The excuse for execution,

for drowning, burning, hanging

and God knows what cruelty?

A few herbs, a little knowledge.

What else had she to sell?

Why were there witches?

Ignorance, bloody ignorance.

Ignorance and violence.

 

But what of those few

who really do open doors best left shut?

What of the Faustian few

who do not sup with a long spoon?

 

This one germinated during a long, spooky drive across Dartmoor in thick mist

◄ Routine is death; Death is routine

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Dave Bradley

Mon 4th Apr 2011 23:40

Thank you for the comments everyone. The point of the picture was to show how people used to caricature witches and (still do) and didn't see them as human beings. But it seems it was ill judged. I'd remove it if I could figure out how.

Special thanks to Anthony for the Monty Python link. Making much the same point in a far more devastating way.

PS As well as the drive, I had a walk across Dartmoor in thick mist, and I swear some hounds started howling nearby. Heaven knows where they were, because there's nothing there. Or is there.........?

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Isobel

Mon 4th Apr 2011 22:18

'Hubble bubble toilet trouble'. Sister Cate used to make me sit and listen to recordings of Macbeth when I was a very young child - can you imagine it? Other kids had bicycles! The above quote was all I could remember at the end of it...
Enjoyed this Dave - it does make you think about all the injustice of the past.

Would agree with Cynthia about the picture - it undermines the poem.

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Cate Greenlees

Mon 4th Apr 2011 16:35

An interesting look into our not so glorious past. It seems almost impossible to think that only a few hundred years ago a woman could be denounced and burnt at the stake for having a wart on her body. I do hope that Witch Finder General is roasting in one of his own fires!
Cate xx

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 4th Apr 2011 12:28

There are some excellent points here, Dave. I'm only sorry you used a silly cartoon that distorts the rational premise. But you do actually seem a bit ambivalent about the whole subject.

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Anthony Emmerson

Sun 3rd Apr 2011 23:01


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zrzMhU_4m-g

Sorry Dave,

I just couldn't help it!

All through the ages society has needed someone to blame. Usually it's the most vulnerable and least able to defend theirselves.

Loved the "long spoon" reference. Fully worth the google!

Regards,
A.E.

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John Coopey

Sun 3rd Apr 2011 18:55

Enjoyed this Dave.
Effective use of the repetitive "What were they to do/sell/how to live" etc.
Almost disappointed youadded th footnote - I'd have liked to have thought it was inspired by Pendle Hill.

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Sun 3rd Apr 2011 17:15

Oooh, interesting - I totally agree and nice questions at the end, though what's the long spoon about?

I show my ignorance I'm sure! (smile)

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