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Standing Above Water

I want you to know me.
A sea of endless faces
has flooded the new frontier,
cyberspace,
and a million voices are crying,
crying to be heard.
Dreams stretch across the void.
This is my vision,
this is my story.
Fingers pound the keyboard.
Eyes flash across the words
written across the screen.
No longer lost
but a face forming in digital,
a prescence is felt,
and the sea no longer drowns me.
A bridge has been built
high above ground,
and yes, there are those
tearing down
foundation
for me to stand on.
But the bridge remains,
and I am lifted off
into cyberspace
to make a name for myself.
And I want you to know me,
know why I'm here.


Standing Above Water
by, Melissa R. Mendelson

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Walls of Mine ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (4281)

Thu 10th Jul 2008 06:24

Dear Melissa

The poem is much different from your usual writes. It is very imaginary and took me floating with you in the space, that was a travel in a outer world. Very modern writing;

Thank you really enjoyed this one.

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

<Deleted User> (5090)

Mon 7th Jul 2008 21:14

I don't know what to say really, apart from that I liked it.

<Deleted User> (5646)

Mon 7th Jul 2008 20:49

Hi Melissa, unlike Jeff, i felt quite uplifted by this.
It feels like someone has pounded the walk of life to attain their goal and make their mark.
Well on the way to success too.
Written so humbly in a style only someone with such charm and elegance as yourself could write it. Lovely. Janet.xx

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 7th Jul 2008 20:27

Quite spooky, not sure if I'm quite on right wavelength, but reminds me of the film 'White noise' where the spirits of people come back through TV. Probably nothing to do with that but I enjoyed it anyway Melissa, thanx Jeff x

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