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Sweet and sour

Sweet and sour

The sweet anticipation
That makes us tingle
Can turn into sour exaggeration
Making us stand out as lone, one, single

The ticking of time that makes you mad
Which starts to slowly torture your brain
On the side there's a flimsy rag
There's so many similarities between the two of use, it's insane

Tock tick tock tick
Shouldn't it be tick tock tick tock
You take in the slightest change from where you sit
As the stability of your mind starts to rock

◄ Pandoras box (wrote and performed especially for the tin angel 01/02/2011)

Mysteries of the night ►

Comments

Philipos

Thu 3rd Feb 2011 23:18

Thank you for sharing this Charlene - a nice piece of creative writing on a subject most of us can identify with x

<Deleted User> (6895)

Thu 3rd Feb 2011 20:06

agree with Jules-your writing is getting better in my humble opinion. thanks-SW.

<Deleted User> (8730)

Thu 3rd Feb 2011 09:27

As usual you have excelled yourself. Lonliness hits home in life, expecially immediately after breakups. I'll post one on this subject soon. I wrote it at Her Majesty's Pleasure; lonliness is rife then.

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