Fancy adding to this???

Found these few words but hit a brick wall. If anyone fancies adding a bit, feel free. Or several of you for that matter! See what comes from it?

 

 

Glass screams shatter through the cold, stone walls,
echoed by a cruel wind.
Outside the snow-blanketed ground is harsh,
it's fleecy coverlet hiding a frozen, unforgiving
quarry.


 

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Sat 22nd Jan 2011 16:27

...quarry

cruel but beautiful
in its persuasiveness
imprisoning,albeit temporarily
the awaiting metamorphosis
of spring

lifting the sheeted ghost
dissipating the shrivelled air
melting the stilled
ledge and bough adorned
jewellery.

begone glare-white mornings!
away yawnings misted!

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Sat 22nd Jan 2011 13:13

hi Kath-just blimped this posting-would be a pleasure to add to this brillantly started poem-off to rack my little brain and get back to you one this one-ta chuck-Stef.x

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Banksy

Sat 22nd Jan 2011 11:47

Stone me.

Glass screams shatter through the cold, stone walls,
echoed by a cruel wind.
Outside the snow-blanketed ground is harsh,
it's fleecy coverlet hiding a frozen, unforgiving
quarry - and it's not easy hiding a quarry.

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