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Reality is Five by Seven Miles

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Crimson gulps tea

anxiously

rough hands grasping the mug

 

Off centre like Wednesday

Trying to get even

with seven

and at one with her past

 

She dreams on tip-toes

of grass birds nests

and the seagulls serenade.

Giggles at the secrets

snow whispers.

 

Reality is a five by seven mile

square

longing for curves.

It snaps rulers with its mind

and wills clocks to stop.

 

Nostalgia curls up

and thinks.

blinks back tears.

looks back.

Has built lack

with her own chapped hands.

 

Crimson hugs her past

it holds her at arms length

smiles beguilingly

malignant in its rejection

and forward thinking

in its backward glance.

 

Burger man

says his names Joe.

Cooks his sausage slow

for taste.

Warns that 'haste creates waste'

and winks.

She thinks she knows what he means

and smiles

as she whiles away another day

◄ Unlikely Hero

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Francine

Wed 26th Jan 2011 04:02

This is so unique with the quirky images and wonderful use of words and phrases! I loved reading this - made me smile : )

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Elaine Booth

Wed 26th Jan 2011 00:12

Wonderful poem, Emma. Need to re-read it again to enjoy it again!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 19th Jan 2011 19:53

This is really good, Emma, a feast of inventive imagery well-expressed with superb diction. Among so many great lines: 'Off centre like Wednesday'. The interaction of the mundane with the 'philosophical' always attracts my attention.

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 19th Jan 2011 05:24

A lovely poem Emma!

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alan barlow

Tue 18th Jan 2011 22:02

off centre gave me a smile which i still wear now such a great line i like this a lot

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Rachel Bond

Tue 18th Jan 2011 20:04

love this, its rhythm, imagery and style.
she dreams on tip toes... example of the way you make contradictory senses work. great
:)

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