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The Fun-Fair

The Fun-Fair

 

Bodies spin, stomachs churning

Wurlitzing like teenage yearning

Shrieks whip up a sugar snap

Ozone crack cherry-pink beehive hairdo

For tonight the scrubland is suited and booted

Embraces the fair - holds tight

As snug as a razor-bladed lapel

 

That flush in your cheek is a fighting chance

The iron in your blood - the weekend

Squeezing through overcrowded veins

Jostling for that single release

A victory where metal meets metal

In a grasp that’s as far from tender

As lips are from a steel toe-cap kiss

 

The fun-fair has hit the town

So all the lads cruise down

Looking smart and fit

Don’t they all look fucking cool?

Don’t they all look up for it?

 

And the girls seek a similar sort

Of cruelty to their sport

But with a focus that’s far straighter

Victims get their just desserts

Fit lads get fucked later

 

The preening and the glamour

Hands unseen and clamour

Of voices dragging laughter

Across the surface of machines

That struggle against the inevitable rust

This many people can only mean

Pleasure at its most hostile

 

Like the last minute of a summer’s evening

That ends with a wasp’s sting

The prize that decorates the drain

With all the suffocated goldfish

Triumphs ring as hollow as a test your strength bell

When you say - Scream if you want to go faster

You mean - Scream.  I won’t tell.

◄ Drinking absinthe

Obsession equals self-obsession ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (4281)

Thu 26th Jun 2008 23:50

Hello, Steve

Sounds like fun sort of Festival in the city like...?
Not sure as each Country has its own fun in the summer time. Your poem has good reflection on the event. Although, I found it a little on a dark side; thank you for sharing.

Written well!

Cheers!
Zuzanna

<Deleted User> (5646)

Thu 26th Jun 2008 19:24

I've always loved the funfair, but this does show the darker side of it.
My neice was killed on a local fairground ride 14 years ago at the age of 15. It hasn't put me off but does make me more aware of the dangers.
I think i enjoyed reading your poem but it brought mixed emotions for me.
Take care, love janet.x

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Jeff Dawson

Thu 26th Jun 2008 18:40

Hi Steve, really like this, the stark reality of most funfairs.

Did you read my 'Funfair' this month. It's more of an ideal world funfair but hope you like it! Jeff

<Deleted User> (4744)

Thu 26th Jun 2008 09:10

The sworded underbelly of the fun fair. I find them so depressing... perhaps it's just me.
Good write.

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