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Deprivation

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When you could see the ribs of the poor

and the fat man watered their beer.

You knew who got exploited

You knew who to pity or fear.


The waif who was wan with rickety knees,

the rich man deaf to his desperate pleas,

died of consumption or killed at the loom.

Nothing marked his pauper tomb.


Now we have underprivileged

who are fat and spotty and rude.

While the super rich are toned and trim,

helping the starving grow food.


An oil rich man with a yacht or two

and a football club for fun

is an easy shot for the feckless lot

who think they have been hard done.


The fat cats they say are parasites

bloated on ill earned gains,

but who is tied to their Blackberry

and who on a couch just lays?


A thirty stone woman

wheezes and pants

the fifty hard yards

to the pub.


There she labours through

five portions a day

of alcohol, burger, nicotine, pizza

and pure, pure ecstasy.


 

Her loutish lover leers

through smack wracked, bloodshot eyes

at the writhing teenage arse

framed by a thin black thong.


A blotchy beau with spike pierced cheeks

leaps to honour's cause.

He and Mr Stanley

will carve respect on cheeky jaws.


Through blood and screams the medics work

to save these wasted lives.

Their patients kick and shout abuse

at those who treat their wounds.


Like education, that they valued,

free health care is their right.

They use it every weekend

after drinking through the night.


The woman lurches homeward

to her seven dadless kids.

They have their chips and Gameboy

and the freedom of the streets.


Just a normal family

struggling through life.

The fat cats are just ignorant

of the poor who have such strife.

◄ Forty Two

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Comments

Malcolm Saunders

Thu 26th Jun 2008 09:34

Thanks Jeff and Ant

Of course I don't mind you saying Jeff. I positively delight in comment of almost any kind and yours is not at all unwelcome.

I am interested in the observation about tangents because, for me, it is a single piece. It is political polemic drawing on social observation Of course I am taking examples at the outer limits of groups who are usually stereotyped quite differently from the ways that I present them. The reason for that is to jar anticipated reactions and, hopefully, bring about re-reading and questioning either of attitudes or the poem.

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 25th Jun 2008 18:45

Great stuff, only thing I thought (if you don't mind me saying) is that it probably went off in one tangent too many, for me anyway. I'm sure it's what you intended but I might have made 2 poems from it! cheers Jeff

Malcolm Saunders

Wed 25th Jun 2008 11:55

Thanks Daniel

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Wed 25th Jun 2008 11:29

Hey there Mal ... the juxtaposition of the images, the poor in Africa, the underprivaleged working to make ends meet and those that don't help themselves. It's hard to know who to pity the most and who needs the most help. Thoughtful write.

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