Polished mystery intrigues my gaze
Lost am I in encapsulated haze
So sweetly occurring
My heart strings stirring
A haven of sincerity
Such beauty a rarity
My heart flutters
My brain stutters
Your angelic in aura
As sweet as any flora
From the north you may hail
Yet my heart has still set sail
cheers gents
(and done)
<Deleted User> (6895)
Fri 14th Jan 2011 20:33
very good poem Al.I especially like the line 'a haven of sincerity' lovely! thanks Stef.
Philipos
Fri 14th Jan 2011 20:32
I enjoyed reading this Alan - in the 4th couplet may I suggest you ditch 'doth' and 'hits' and pluralise the end words for a crisper effect - well done
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<Deleted User> (6315)
Sat 15th Jan 2011 19:04
Oh I did enjoy the feel of this one...yea it left me smiling which is a good thing isn't it? :)