Polished mystery intrigues my gaze

Lost am I in encapsulated haze


So sweetly occurring

My heart strings stirring


A haven of sincerity

Such beauty a rarity


My heart flutters

My brain stutters


Your angelic in aura

As sweet as any flora


From the north you may hail

Yet my heart has still set sail

◄ The Scream

The pen is mightier than the sword ? ►


stella jones

Sat 15th Jan 2011 19:04

Oh I did enjoy the feel of this one...yea it left me smiling which is a good thing isn't it? :)

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alan barlow

Fri 14th Jan 2011 21:08

cheers gents

(and done)

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Fri 14th Jan 2011 20:33

very good poem Al.I especially like the line 'a haven of sincerity' lovely! thanks Stef.

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Fri 14th Jan 2011 20:32

I enjoyed reading this Alan - in the 4th couplet may I suggest you ditch 'doth' and 'hits' and pluralise the end words for a crisper effect - well done

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