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you called me

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You called to me

We played, just for a while

When blackthorn blossomed and the sea was soft.

 

The to and fro of tides can catch you out!

A high tide, dangerous as the fullest heart.

And blackthorn branches bear the sharpest thorns.

 

But gentleness beats passion at the end

And true love, sweet as friendship

Says - all mend!

 

 

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<Deleted User> (8943)

Thu 6th Jan 2011 13:05

Thanks for your comment on "Regret"
Your poem here is almost the opposite of mine in sentiment.
Love "dangerous as the fullest heart" - I know the feeling...

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winston plowes

Tue 28th Dec 2010 21:07

a lovely little read Ann. Very gentle, Win X

Philipos

Tue 28th Dec 2010 20:54

Nice gentle feel to this - my fav:
When blackthorn blossomed and the sea was soft.

<Deleted User> (7212)

Tue 28th Dec 2010 19:48

I thought you'd run out of poems to write ? eh?

<Deleted User> (7789)

Tue 28th Dec 2010 18:07

Some lovely bitter-sweet images there Ann!

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