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Palindrome Girl

I see a palindrome girl,

Luminous she glows back to front

Onwards with Snow White beauty.

Vivid visions veer me towards a vortex of

Excellency in your execution of poetic elocution.

 

You are humbler than Pi

Oh you circumference my heart at 3.142 much

Unable to justify your magnificence with words.

Avatar like, I see you.

 

My homage ends as a palindrome like you

Calling out truth in transcendent echo.

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Indigo

Wed 22nd Dec 2010 00:21

Thanks for the feedback.

I don't usually write love poetry but I'm feeling amorous recently.

Philipos

Tue 21st Dec 2010 19:47

I liked this a lot - to comply with rule of 3s you could drop one of the v words in line 4 of stanza 1 (suggest vivid) or risk over alliteration - nice understated piece

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