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November (Unbearable one)

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So, so unreal-

cold and bright November day

the loved ones all around my head

and yet some miles away

 

Wrinkles on our faces

painted by the love of sun

and a peaceful dream that makes your beauty

an unbearable one

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winston plowes

Fri 12th Nov 2010 21:05

Hi Dali, Maybe there is something about a cold clear November day that clears the head and brings clarity to thoughts. I got this sharpness from your words. The clear truth can also hurt however. Win x

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