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NOT A PATCH ON US

Lest – lest, pay heed lest

we for-get we are the best;

lose sight of Old England’s story

one of endless power and glory

blood-and-gutsy, primal, gory;

triumph in each foreign land.

 

Might - might, ours by right

just remember might is right!

None surpass the English Army

foes like Hitler – all are barmy

same for Mullah, same for Swami;

Christ is England’s guiding hand.

 

Kill – kill, brave hearts fill!

Candle on a window sill . . .

Each man skilled in naming parts

assorted limbs and misplaced hearts

life that suddenly departs;

a flaming waste – but grand!

 

Soft – soft. Bugler – soft!

Banner hoisted half aloft.

Celebrate the warrior path

raise the young on noble wrath -

mourn it, at the Cenotaph

as - even now - more war is planned.

remembrance

◄ JOURNEY'S END

Workshopping Seamus ►

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Tom Harding

Sat 29th Jan 2011 12:58

I agree, this is excellent, solidly written stuff. The rhythm is there, the meaning profound. I'm sure this would resound well if read out loud.

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barrie singleton

Sat 6th Nov 2010 09:24

I was going for philosophy Greg - must have taken a wrong fork.
Chris - your Cosmological Constant is showing! See you in the trenches when the aliens come.

Thanks to you both.

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Chris Dawson

Sat 6th Nov 2010 08:40

Excellent stuff.
Cx

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Greg Freeman

Fri 5th Nov 2010 21:35

I feel your anger here, Barrie. But I'm sure you feel and agree that for most Remembrance Sunday is not the glory, but the sorrow and pity of war

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