The Gallery #2
Someone left luggage
in a pile on the floor,
I lifted it up
to a hook by the door.
When I came back
to my lasting surprise
A crowd had now gathered-
it won the first prize.
Comments
<Deleted User> (8753)
Sat 30th Oct 2010 18:19
always enjoyed your work Tommy, this is exception
@steve: :o)@Winston: :o)@Cynthia: yes but this is a reworking and reads much better. :o)
ps: but I am uneasy as to the ambiguity of the recipient.
I remember this one! I'm sure I do. Great to have it reposted - I loved it.
ha ha tommy well done
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Tommy Carroll
Fri 19th Nov 2010 21:46
@bernard: thank you :o)