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Rzhepick (Freedom)

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Spring! Spring! Spring!

The bells ring, ring, ring!

I am in the park under the tree.

I am free, free, free!

The crows are sitting on the tree,

They are also free, free, free.

Nothing clever comes into my head,

Only foolish things instead.

More than that!

Those critters which are on the tree

They have more freedom than me.

Their litters they throw on my head.

Should I cry or be glad?


◄ Don't Be In a Hurry, My Life!

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Fri 29th Oct 2010 23:58

Hehe - brilliant my friend :)
Best wishes, Dave

<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 29th Oct 2010 20:28

ah! but what would we do without the beautiful birds or beautiful Ladies who write beautiful poems-well done dear girl! lots of my love to you-Stefan-xx

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Fri 29th Oct 2010 09:21

I've written it just for fun. It is "rzhepick" like "limerick". If you have noticed "rzhepi" is the first part of my surname. So, I've decided to write funny things and call them "rzhepicks"

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