Truths Untold

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The lights are out upstairs in me

Hell knows my head’s been gone so long

Others can’t reach the place I be

Mind fears you are the only one


Kings fall and prince’s hearts unfold

Never to sail the storms I ride

Only the pen your fingers hold

Will write these truths untold inside


◄ An Ode to a Poet

Expressions so Deep ►


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Ann Foxglove

Tue 24th Nov 2009 19:59

Really beautiful, sounds like someone longing to find true peace.

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Mon 16th Jun 2008 16:21

A lovely poem.

<Deleted User> (5984)

Wed 11th Jun 2008 20:08

What an absolutely beautiful poem. It is very gentle and I love your rhyme scheme. A very soothing poem.


<Deleted User> (4281)

Wed 11th Jun 2008 01:48

Dear Alison

You poem is very nice… Shows unfold mystery especially in the last stanza. I have enjoyed reading your thoughts provoking poem...Keep up the great work!

Thank you,

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Jeff Dawson

Tue 10th Jun 2008 21:40

How enchanting, nice stuff Ally, you're on a roll! Keep it up, enjoy your work, Jeff

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