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When More Has Been Said Than Done

The licking lightning wrests the sky from the dark,

Both warring and weeping in its breaking brevity,

Flashing collective notions of a life through the minds of all who look on,

Rumbling with discontent as to how soon it had to leave,

To which the wind shrieks an accord,

Clinging to faces of rocks and people that will not change, 

When more has been said than done

 

And the parties shatter the silence of the aftermath,

Where dusk and dawn are left in inconsequence,

The guests cheer as their spilling glasses are raised in a toast,

To the vistas between the manifest and dream worlds they know,

Yet want to visit, someday, at the end of their lives,

Morbidity forsaken, a new experience all the same,

Where those with no preparation perhaps have the most

 

Whilst silhouettes play through a screen,

Mirroring images of eroticism,

And the kisses and movements were more genuine

Than anything we ever knew,

Tripping through the most sublime of scenes,

And for none but ourselves came even an inkling of sin.

 

And the meandering course of the water,

Reflects and imitates our ever so clumsy paths,

And the only lives we knew emerged for and of our fun,

The seal of the pact of lips to the tear in the love and the land,

Where the flowers and flies surround our deadened selves,

When more has been said than done

◄ Absurdities

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Andy N

Mon 25th Oct 2010 08:24

enjoyed this josh.. maybe a little long in places but i did enjoy this! x

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Joshua Van-Cook

Sat 23rd Oct 2010 20:33

Have tried to upload recording but the computer's not co-operating I'm afraid. Glad you like it, I'll try to get access to a computer that will not go out of its way to hinder me in nearly every way possible.

- Josh

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Noetic-fret!

Sat 23rd Oct 2010 19:17

Hi Joshua, been a while since I have read good work in here. (I should talk). But this is real quality. Today i have been inspired by yourself and Lynn, well done. I would love to hear a recital. Perhaps you could record it and post in here. Very nice, very thoughtful. Thanks for sharing.

rgds

Michael

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 23rd Oct 2010 15:36

My word, Josh, what are you eating these days? Depth and insight and imagination and admirable diction and internal music - the list goes on. Really good.

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