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Mouth's as deep as a well
Got things to say, to contain
That I love you more
Than I did before
Nothing's been right
Months to date
Mouth's closed up
Going through a dry spell
Of things to say, to feel,
More than I ever could tell, can't, shouldn't.
for a short piece, Georgina - i think you say quite a lot for example i like 'mouth's as deep as a well' and I also like the finale line which i probably would have split up, but like the fact you didn't... but it's a good, good piece.. keep em coming! x
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Andy N
Tue 12th Oct 2010 08:16
for a short piece, Georgina - i think you say quite a lot for example i like 'mouth's as deep as a well' and I also like the finale line which i probably would have split up, but like the fact you didn't... but it's a good, good piece.. keep em coming! x