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Don't Touch My Heart! (Biting the bullet)

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Don’t touch my heart!

It is broken.

There is no love in it.

I have closed it.

No one cares to see it bleeding,

no one knows its needing.

Love bullet crashed it in pieces,

but I will never fall on my knees.

My heart is not feigning,

the scars are still paining,

but I will never cry,

I will never stand a lie.

There is no love in my heart,

but there is a hope for a new start.

 

Larisa R (Odessa, Ukraine)

29/9 2010

◄ It is so good.....

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<Deleted User> (7789)

Wed 29th Sep 2010 23:01

Hi Larisa! I like the honesty and the hope despite the disappointment expressed. The heart is of course really our private feelings and sometimes we show them and sometimes we don't - but we can still write about them and this is touchingly done here! x

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Wed 29th Sep 2010 22:36

Thank you, dear Lynn.

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Lynn Dye

Wed 29th Sep 2010 22:02

I like this poem, Larisa. And thank you for your kind comments on "Us and Them". Warmest wishes, Lynn xx

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Wed 29th Sep 2010 21:06

Thank you, dear Stefan for the suggestion. It sounds really better.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 29th Sep 2010 20:35

Good Evening Larisa-nice,neat optimistic poem('new start')remember you asked me to help you if needed-som is it ok to suggest'no one-CARES-to see it bleeding? don,t worry if you prefer your line-its still a really nice poem-Thank you-Stef-xx

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