Summer Rain

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The smell of fresh rain

Following hot days of sun,

A rainbow in June.

Blades of grass glisten

With pearl-like drops of water

From billowing clouds.

Red rosebuds sparkle,

Their scent mingles with the rain,

A fresh beginning.

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Lynn Dye

Sun 12th Sep 2010 10:21

Ha ha, thank you, Ann. xx

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 11th Sep 2010 07:02

So Lynn - you've invented the haikuhaikuhaiku! Well done ;-) xx

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Lynn Dye

Fri 10th Sep 2010 22:02

Posh? You mean, I've written a posh poem? Well, that has to be a first! Lol. Actually, it's in the style of 3 haikus joined together. Thanks for reading and commenting, Stef, your title is the title of the picture as I remember it! Luv, Lynn xx

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Thu 9th Sep 2010 21:44

Good evening oh very posh poem n pikky poster! now then girly! what about Mr potato heads suggestion of re-titling this lovely poem-'Rainbows and Roses' see how clever I yam!(NOT?)no charge chuck-peace,beads n bells n shiny things to thee fair Maiden-Stef-xx(B-xx)

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