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When I Was Going Home

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When I was going home

 

  the darkness was around,

 

  nobody on the street,.

 

  I saw an old woman,

 

  she was a dandelion like,.

 

  she rummaged in the refuse bins

 

  which were all alike.

 

  She was the one who's got her pension

 

  "in the proportion with her job".

 

  I wouldn't like here to mention

 

  that she was just robbed.

 

  She bought the medicines

 

  had not enough for food,

 

  she bought the food

 

  had not enough for medicines.

 

...And close to the refuse bins

 

  there was a stall

 

  and boxes with the fruit were near by.

 

  "It looks you're pushed of money"-

 

  she heard the voice.

 

  "take some from here,

 

  it's much better choice."

 

She smiled sadly and

 

I've heard her answer:

 

"Can't take another’s’".

 

And with those words

 

  she slowly moved......

 

  to another refuse bin.

 

  I saw that scene.

 

  I began to cry

 

  and I know why.

 

  I was delighted with her greatness,

 

  I was ashamed of my carefree life;

 

  and if I were her I wouldn't decline.

 

 

 

Larisa R(Odessa, Ukraine)

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<Deleted User> (7789)

Thu 9th Sep 2010 22:22

Another hard-hitting one- actually this is quite moving Larisa, especially if based on a real observation. It's interesting that this poverty and the struggle of the welfare state to cope with ever more mouths to feed, young and old, is causing a real crisis in many countries, including here in the UK.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 9th Sep 2010 20:22

Thank you, dear Stefan.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Thu 9th Sep 2010 19:58

aww! lovely Larisa! and how humanly observant of other peoples suffering instead of thinking only of ones self-well done!-Stef-xx(M-xx)

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