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My Foolish Heart

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My foolish heart!


Stop beating so nervously and quickly!


I have no more strength to bear this pain,


everything is quite plain.


My eyes have become tearless,


my arms have become helpless,


I have no more strength of will,


I am so tired and ill.


There is no more sense to forgive,


there is no more sense to believe.


My foolish heart, stop trembling


just because of one call from him,


the call which has broken the silence


and looked like a violence.


My foolish heart! Do you hear me?


I will not allow you to speak.


I don't give a damn that I can't sleep.


I don't want to love him any more.


What for? All we had was before.


My foolish heart! Keep quiet!


I am very tired, I am not desired.


My foolish heart! Look at me!


I've let him go,


now you let him go too.




Larisa R (Odessa, Ukraine)

Love lost

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Fri 27th Aug 2010 19:35

Hi, Stefan, my dear mentalman. Hi, Lynn!
You are the most kind woman. Thank you so much for your nice comments.
With love and hugs, Larisa

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Lynn Dye

Fri 27th Aug 2010 17:20

This is so sad and beautiful, Larisa, it flows really well, just love it. xx

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 26th Aug 2010 11:12

Thank you, Stefan!

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Thu 26th Aug 2010 10:52

Good morning Larisa-a very very good poem indeed-love the last two lines especially-well done Odessa girl! warm regards-Stefan-xx(M-xx)ps-nice title and lovely image

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