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Driver

The newspapers lay soaked in the corner,

The bus droning down the lane,

Caught between,

But entirely averted, 

To all except its driver's pain

 

Tangled up in a waking nightmare, finds himself

Whispering only to he and his bus,

The coins dropped,

With each passing sign,

Memories laden with little but rust.

 

And he goes home, God only knows when,

For his watch has died from boredom,

Getting through the door,

Tries to douse his pain,

With phials of concentrated laudanum

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Andy N

Thu 5th Aug 2010 08:09

I like this, Josh but for some reason think there is more to be explored here - perhaps a extra stanza or two to help us fill out his character more or maybe another poem or two!

I love 'Memories laden with little but rust' however..

Keep it coming!

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