Another poet in the family

It seems I have a rival in the family from the poetry side of things.

My 11-years old Granddaughter Beatrix has recently discovered that I have a poetry website and has decided to begin writing her own, starting with haiku. Here is her first attempt, which I have to say is too damn good for my liking. I think I'm going to have to 'up' my game.

whispers in the breeze

leaves fall slow like memories

earth exhales in peace

(Beatrix Brazeley 08/25)

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David RL Moore

Tue 5th Aug 2025 22:37

That is rather beautiful, what a lovely soul to nurture,

lucky you, all the best G

David RL Moore

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