boulevard mirage

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Unmoored, drifting— a face blurs 
against window reflections, is it mine? 
A stranger’s? No matter.

Streetlights flicker in shallow pools, 
mirror-puddles swallowing neon, while a palm tree bends— 
wind pressing, steel humming quiet.

Petals scatter, soft confetti 
caught between tram rails, dissolving— 
the last echoes of footsteps slipping away.

Stone rises, rigid symmetry— glass glints, 
unfeeling, against the dawn. Beneath a bridge, 
unnoticed vines creep, pulling at concrete like forgotten hands.

The boulevard moves forward. And so do I.
 

 

 

 

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Red Brick Keshner

Thu 19th Jun 2025 04:10

Thank you dear @Stephen Atkinson; makes all the work worthwhile to have you much valued feedback 🌷🕊️🙏🏻

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 18th Jun 2025 23:43

Great imagery. Nice one 👏

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Red Brick Keshner

Wed 18th Jun 2025 13:10

Yes @Ray Miller, that was a reflection which made the poem too long and too unwieldy. A failed attempt it would seem. 🌷🕊🙏🏻

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Ray Miller

Wed 18th Jun 2025 09:35

Enjoyed the images. Just as you mention symmetry, the poem becomes unsymmetrical, or is it asymmetrical. Whatever, are the 4 additional stanzas your attempt to address that?

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