Transition to light

 

Deep the sky , in the meterior shore,

Here sitting me, reciting my chore.

 

Word to word,    I wanna transfer to u

Oh my shadow , i am ur blew.

Feeling almost ,it's new to all me

I am admiring the blue sky in the wavy silk ,

      the meterior shore reminds me

 

Leaving behind  everyone i met,

Life is unjust ,i wanna submerge in the lust.

 

No fear struck my heart,

It's just a new struggling start .

 

I do remind the brightest night 

Which come after the dusk before the dawn,

And even my stiffness with the darkest storm .

 

Heaven or hell,it's ur choice ,

Oh this transition is my greatest rejoice.

 

*Note- shadow  is death god, the poet is talking about all the events happened in his life   when it is terminal of his life  and giving a brief view of his journey along his life.  He knows , he has to meet his ultimate end soon and thus the poem is what he wants to say to death god.

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LITTLE MISCHIEVIOUS SOUL

Thu 5th Jun 2025 21:08

U could brief outline about it is from last lines . I Know death and other terms can't be called for relaxation but for the person to face ,it is the ultimate end and thus a destined future . Though the terms of death are considered to be negative but it is the ultimate truth one has to face and accept . That thought is what poet want to add into his poem .
The poet knows many of you may not like the vision of poem and thus he had no bold ambition of likes or comments for the poem.
But feel free to review through commenting , he likes to accept what the readers feel about the poems.

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