unrelenting horizon

 

The sheets loosen,
brittle with yesterday’s sweat,
my limbs heavy
with the unremembered struggle

of another dream slipping into daylight.

The tide surges again— not the sea,
but the pull of routine, a weight
pressing against the ribs.
The road throbs under hurried feet,
a chorus of engines swallowing dawn’s breath.
We rise, we move, we forget
what it was we were chasing.

Beneath the pale flare of a morning too sharp,
the sun spares nothing, nor does it wait.
It only reveals— the quiet surrender,
the unbroken loop, the ceaseless chase, 

                                 the unspoken cost.

  

 

 

 

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Red Brick Keshner

Sun 1st Jun 2025 23:40

Thanks @Rolph David🌷🕊️🙏🏻 it was good to be able to word the feelings in some way. 🌷

Rolph David

Sun 1st Jun 2025 13:10

Hey Rick,
I just read Unrelenting Horizon and wanted to say how much it really hit me. You captured that heavy, restless feeling of waking up trapped in the endless cycle of routine so vividly—like the weight of everything presses down before the day even begins. The way you describe the morning sun exposing the quiet surrender felt deeply honest and raw. It’s a powerful reminder of how exhausting the chase can be, even when we barely notice it. Thanks for putting those feelings into words so beautifully.
Regards,
Rolph

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Red Brick Keshner

Sun 1st Jun 2025 10:21

That’s a very moving thought and thus worded as to remind me of my late grandfather who could only describe his ailment as a niggling “dull ache.” A most appreciated visit and comment @DRL Moore🌷🕊️🙏🏻

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David RL Moore

Sun 1st Jun 2025 08:10

Hi RBK,

This is a feeling very well expressed.

I suspect many feel similar but would not be so well able to express that dull ache, as you have here.

David

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