Bitter Heights

They tell us all to climb the tree,
To reach what hangs for all to see.
But though we stretch and though we try,
The fruit remains too far, too high.

A fox will feast, a lion dine,
While sparrows peck at crumbs and pine.
The branches bend for weight and pride,
But never lean to those outside.

We’re told, “Grow strong, and you may rise—
The climb is fair, the prize the prize.”
Yet roots run deep in crafted ground,
And ladders break when we are found.

The ones who feed atop the bough
Were once like us — or so they vow.
But once they reached the ripened prize,
They pulled the ladder, blocked the rise.

We march, we plead, we raise our voice,
They nod, as if we had a choice.
Their laws are leaves that drift and fall,
But never shake the trunk at all.

So we remain, our necks pulled sore,
Our fingers bruised from grasping more.
The sweetest fruits — they never drop —
They rot above. And still — we hop.

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Rolph David

Sun 18th May 2025 07:51

To Red:
Red, thanks for reading and for the layered reflection. I really appreciate your take on the imagery — especially your insight into the generational undertones. That perspective brought something new to my own view of the piece.
Cheerio,
Rolph

To Uilleam:
Uilleam, thank you for your thoughts — “Ladderism” is a striking term, and sadly, it fits all too well. You captured a tension I was circling around. Glad the poem sparked something.
Regards,
Rolph

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 16th May 2025 18:59

.........oh, and I forgot to include a number of openly gay radio / youtube presenters, who spend much of their time denigrating ethnic minorities, entirely forgetful of the discrimination their own predecessors suffered for their sexuality.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 15th May 2025 07:41

A lot of it about Rolph; what I call "Ladderism".

Many of the worst offenders here in the UK government, and their lackeys in the media, are those who, in the past might themselves have suffered from discrimination and abuse; ethnic minorities and women; those of the "I'm allright Jack, mindset".

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Red Brick Keshner

Thu 15th May 2025 00:02

Oh, so much better than the carrot dangling from a pole as incentive for the donkey! The allure of ascent and lofty ideals are much better represented here. It also encapsulates a generational angst above and complementary to individual inner struggles. Good one, Rolph! 🌷🙏🏻🕊

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